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accusations, dangling, feather, glistening, haikus, haunting, heartache, homesickness, inevitable, jack collom, jeopardize, lingering, lune, pace, picture, poem, scent, severe, shadows, smiling, speculations, touch
This is my first attempt at a fixed-form variant haiku created by Jack Collom, called LUNE! It is measured in words rather than syllables and is free from all constraints associated with haiku, thus need not contain kigo (season-word), kire (cut), may rhyme and may use all other poetic devices. The form is 3/5/3 words.
(As per Wikipedia)
*Fingers Crossed*
Our feet dangling
In the ice cold water
Glistening in sunlight
Speculations and accusations
Threaten to jeopardize strong relationships
Even destroy them
Inevitable bouts of
Homesickness and anxiety arise, causing
Painfully severe heartache
If only his,
Feather touch and fragrant scent lingered, a
Dream come true
The dark shadows
Fall in step with me
My pace quickens
Her smiling face
Haunting, everlasting, may her soul
Rest in peace
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