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Sometimes,
The People you can’t live without,
Live without you !
GOOD OLD TIMES ! :’)
Sitting outside
Deep in thoughts
The tension evaporates
As I see
Flocks of pigeons
And a gaggle of geese
Strangely,
Leaving me calm and at peace.
The light breeze blowing
The leaves slowly rustling
The noisy chattering birds
Lovingly cuddling.
The sound of my father shooting hoops
my mother watching news
as she holds the warm cup of coffee
both forgetting the everyday issues.
My vision suddenly blurs
Crimson and coral coloured flowers
With bright emerald leaves
The long eucalyptus trees
Vanish from my sight
To be replaced by
Salty uncontrollable tears
And never ending fears.
A sense of loneliness
Comes over me
A longing to be
With my loved ones
To talk till my heart’s content
Like we used to before,
Now those memories seem
so surreal and distant.
My heart filled with woe.
As the sky turns
A bright orange
The leaves become still
The chattering dies down
The TV is turned off
And the court is now barren.
The eerie silence haunts me
The darkness reminding me
Of the days long forgotten
My lips tremble
My heart aches
They’re no longer with me
They’re presence
just for namesake.
They’re gone with no hope of returning
A part of me lost forever
All I’m left with are the memories
Fading with time as the reality becomes clearer. . .
" .. . .Ain't no doubt about it, I'm losing you, Somehow the wires have crossed, Communication's lost .. ." -John Lennon ( I'm losing you )
WordsFallFromMyEyes said:
Such emotion, Sanah. You are excellent with poetry.
Sanah said:
Friends are an important part of life. It hurts to see them change. Thank you for reading my poems. :)
saffronsound said:
you pour a lot of real emotion into your poetry. i particularly like this one – the suddenness of tears, of being overcome by emotion makes it very genuine and tugs at the heart. keep writing!
Bottled Up Sentiments. . said:
Thanks a lot !!
It came from the heart.
I’m really glad you liked it. :)
rastelly said:
I like the images you
describe in this one.
Bottled Up Sentiments. . said:
Thank you. :)
Sophia Morgan (griffinspen) said:
I loved this poem. I also loved how you made the rhymes work, without making them too prominent or put in a form. :) Thanks for visiting my blog, fellow poet! :D
Bottled Up Sentiments. . said:
Sophia ! Great to hear from you.
I read YOUR poems.
You’re so talented.
A poem a day. Classic and not as easy as it seems.
Keep up the good work !
And thank you. :)
hotshot bald cop said:
I just said that a number of days in the past!!!
Bottled Up Sentiments. . said:
Haha. Happens with everyone.
Thanking you for reading. :)