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alone, babe, bane, beach, beautiful eyes, boon, chestnut, hair, lips, ocean, photograph, pictures, poem, quotes, sand, ship, sparkle, travelling, world
Standing next to her
Holding her hand
A smile plastered on your face
Your feet buried in the sand
With nothing but your shorts on
You still look clothed
Scantily clad, she struck a pose
Everything about her
I began to loathe
Your face inches away from hers
Her lips, luscious and slightly parted
With chestnut hair and eyes the colour of the ocean
I wonder which pick up line you had finally chosen.
If it wasn’t for your eyes
You would’ve looked truly blissful
But the sparkle nowhere in sight
These weren’t the eyes,
That once shone so bright.
They seemed to tell a story of their own
Deep down you knew you’d soon be alone
As the ship would sail once again
The boon of travelling the world
Turned out to be a bane
Once inside the cramped cabin
The ocean, as far as the eyes can see
You’d eagerly wait for your next destination
To finally be on land
Another photograph taken
Holding another girl’s hand.
Beautiful imagery :)
Thank you, samalander. :)
Amazing imagery, much enjoyable read.
Thanks a lot. :)
A worth read. Most of it was over my understanding. For sure, I nowhere sensed any negativity but a hope for something new.
Arrre neeraj ! Thanks a lot bey !
I’m happy you liked it. :)
beautiful composition Sanah.. you are the A.R. Rehman of peotry.. seriously!! :)
Hahahahaa ! That’s a new one.
Thanks ! :D
Sad and epic, I was riveted :)
Andrea
Thank you so much Andrea !
I went through your poems and they’re really wonderful. :)
Of course! : ]
Sanah, undoubtedly well written poem…but i don’t know but somehow i sense negativity in all your poems…Let bygones be bygones..cheer up girl :)
You got me !
Yes, I agree with you on this point but I’ve never really been an optimist !
Anyways, thank you. :)
Nice job
-CT
Thank you Chris !
brilliant sanah.
Thank you. :)