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clammy, dream, drudgery, exam result, lingering, palpitations, parched, pictures, poem, queasy, quote, suspense, sweat trickles, tremble
My fingers linger over the keyboard
Lips move in silent prayer
Stomach growls and groans
Growing queasier by the second
Never before has this happened
Rib cage vibrates with every palpitation
Clammy fingers tremble
Warm beads of sweat
Trickle through my temple
Down my cheek
I hear questions being asked in the distance
My throat feels parched, I cannot speak
Mind wills me to type
Those seven cursed digits
That will reveal the result of a yearlong drudgery
And just as I look at the screen
My alarm goes off
Waking me up at the climax of my dream
And suspense lingers in the air. .
Your words have a wonderful flow and as you share the more they blossom…you write beautifully indeed!
too beautiful
Hi, Read many of your writings … and what is interesting is I am 53 yrs old seen a lot of things in life and your thoughts and insights have not only caused me to take a break and reflect but also inspired me. Thank you …
Well done! Good job at pulling the reader along.
this is fantastic!
Very nice~!!!!
indeed it builds! :-)
Ooooh … the tension builds! :)