Tags
absence, change, end, enigma, faraway look, fear, happiness, hugs, infinite nothingness, lost, man of few words, martyr, memories, mystery, pictures, poem, quiet, quirky, quotes, scared, scars, silence, sorrow, stars, teardrop
Write me a letter
Tell me how you feel
As you wallow in your sorrow
For you there’s no tomorrow
You hide behind your scars
Like your end is near
But with me by your side
You can overcome any fear
You say I’m your life
And I brighten your day
Only my happiness counts
For my safety, you pray.
A man of few words
You’ve forever been a mystery
Your actions speak louder than your words
You’re courteous yet quirky.
I remember watching you
Quiet and still
You’d sit for hours
Staring into the infinite nothingness
Counting the stars.
A teardrop would appear
As you’d hastily brush it away
Scared of showing your weak side
Yet wanting me to stay.
We’d hold hands
And say nothing for a while
The silence comforting us both
Then with a faraway look in my eyes
I’d say the world was hostile
That change is inevitable
That time seems to fly.
You’d sincerely listen to me ramble
Without uttering a word
You’d wrap your arms around
Console me with your melodic breathing sound.
Write me a letter
A written proof of your love
As your words are of a martyr
And as they say- Absence makes the heart grow fonder
But with every passing minute,
Our memories become fainter. .
you did yr job well/ satisfyingly/ thanx
Thank you !! That means a lot to me. :)
Absolutely gorgeous! You’re talented!! :-)
Warm regards,
Subhan
So are you, Subhan.
Thank you. :D
well done Sanah.. it’s a fabulous piece of art..!! :)
Thank you guneet ! :)
I like this it made my mind jump all over the place ;D well penned
Mission successful. :P
Thanks a lot. :D
very interesting, i like your work, keep it up
I’m so glad. Thank you.
this is lovely, i drifted to a beautiful place as i read…
Thanks ! :)
LOLs…are you sure you aren’t reading what I’m thinking…?
WOW, I think you are sometimes sitting inside this ole Crones head or heart turning the pages of my thoughts….
if this wasnt such a public forum, i would tell you what this poem of yours says …
Keep writing , I love it!
)0(
BlessedBe
LadyBlueRose
That’s exactly what I thought when I read YOUR poems.
We do think alike. :)
You keep getting better and better all the time, I love this one.
Thank you Kat ! :)
nice poem and lovely images attached too.
I put in a lot of effort to find apt images. thanks. :D
wooowww!! i love the mixture of the pictures with your awesome words!! Really amazing!! :-)
Thank you ! :)