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I watched you leave
Teary eyed
You held me close
As you whispered your last goodbye.
You took my hand
And entwined with yours
Before I could speak
You kissed my cheek
And said you’d never forget
The day we met
And every little thing we’ve done
Under the starry night
In the pouring rain
Or the blazing sun
Every moment filled with laughter and endless fun.
Gullible and naïve
I hung onto every word you said
Till days passed and nights crawled by
When I finally realized I was living a lie.
You never belonged to me
I was nowhere near your heart
You’d given it away a long time back
And she was the one you truly loved all this time
I stifled a sob and cut the phone
I knew you could never be mine.
I often wonder if you ever think about me
Sit back and reminisce with a sigh
I haven’t been able to forget you completely
no matter how hard I try
to deny.
One day, I’d wish you were there to catch me
When I stumble and fall
Someday, I’d muster up the courage
To set aside my ego
And give you a call. .
An Unspoken Goodbye. A wonderful poem, the words, just amazing. I enjoyed reading it very much. Well done.
Ignorance may be bliss,
But oblivion is fatal.
And dude did you DRAW all of that?
Where the fuck are you?
Sanah. Really you touched me deep. Within! Some day I’m gonna say this to my current g/f and it hurts to think about it…. And hey thanks for stopping by my blog,
Hey Charles. Thank you !
But don’t say that. Have faith in her. :)
this is so true and beautiful. Glad to see you back.
Also, the first four quotes are exactly where I have been lately.
Thank you !! :D
I read some of your poems and my fav turned out to be “The man with crutches” ! :)
this is very good Sanah, I am glad you stopped by mine and I came to see what you wrote..
Really beautiful, and I can relate as well..
Thank You….you are very gifted, keep on writing for us
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BlessedBe
LadyBlueRose
Thank you so much ! :)
Beautiful…he made a mistake. I am curious as I recently left an unspoken good bye…not for another woman…but to return to the proximity of my son…and I still love the woman…does that fall into the same category as the worst way to say good bye?
Alright Sir, here’s the thing. THIS whole situation didn’t happen to me. It’s the guilt of leaving others hanging is what made me write this. Coming to your situation, all I can say is that if you still love her, tell her. It’s never too late. She may not forgive you for leaving without a word but if she ever loved you, she’ll know how much your son matters to you. You did what you thought was right at the moment but it’s always nice to have a closure. However it may turn out.
Hope it helped. :)
Ha…a little twist there I didn’t expect…you mean person! LOL. No, I spoke words and made my position clear…it was much more complicated that I have time to describe…but I enjoyed your ironic twist in this piece. Nice work.
“If you love something, let it be free. If it comes
back to you it’s yours, if it doesn’t, it was never
meant to be.” Like your list of related quotes, this
was another I think relates. Great way to frame
the end of a relationship. “Parting is such sweet
sorrow.” :)
It is, sometimes. What I DON’T believe in is “Ignorance is bliss”. :)
well done. I’m proud of you…
Kishu ! Thank you !! :)
Even I’m teary eyed at this point of time. It hurts a lot. Accepting the truth is very hard but ultimately you have to do so.
This was an awesome piece of art. Thanks for sharing Sanah,
Have a Great Day. :)
Hey guneet. Thanks a lot. :)