When you look into my eyes
The time just flies
You’re the one for me
You’re my ecstasy
I loved the way you looked at me
When it was just you and me
I loved the way you made me feel special
The way you stood for me
I loved you with all my heart
But you broke it and tore it apart
Now blood flows through my eyes
My heart aches and cries
For the one I loved the most
And now the memories haunt me like a
Long forgotten ghost!
I hate myself for what you did
And try to think it’s just a dream
This will soon fade away
To make the moments again splendid
But how can I escape the truth
You hate me with all your might
What were the reasons for our fight?
That made me cry whole day whole night!
How can you forget the moments we spent
Together, alone, the way it meant
the fun we had
the way we went mad
Screaming shouting all over the place
With such ease and grace.
The way you went flirting with others
I scolded you like a mother
The way we looked for each other everywhere
We surely looked like a pair.
At last you said goodbye to me
The day you went away from me
You never looked back once
To see if I was there
You never asked for me
To see if I ever cared.
But hey I know you were faking it all
Never bothered to at least make a call
But go and live your life my dear
Without any shame or fear
And as I love you
I wish you all the best
Go my dear conquer the world
And stand ahead of the rest!
I wrote this when I was thirteen. Due to my fluctuating mood and hormonal imbalance I thought it was the end of the world. Now, I know better !
MY 2nd LOVE !!!
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AmaNi Ahmad said:
Splendid! This is a sweet tender touching poem I believe most people can relate to, i know i did!
Great job.
Sanah said:
I really appreciate you taking out time to go through my poems. :)
Ginger said:
Freelance writer.
Journal writer. Kitne saare options hei tere liye;)
Sanah said:
Ashu ! Rehne de. Zyada ho gaya thoda. :P
But thanks ! :D
dewanabhi101 said:
I would be too late to comment on this blog but the poem is very beautifully written and it clearly shows the emotions and feelings that went into this blog.
Sanah said:
It’s never too late.
Thanks a ton anyway ! :)
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khensan said:
I like this poem a lot, brings back lots of memories.
lscotthoughts said:
Beautiful and this reminds me of when I was 19! (many years ago)
♡ The Tale Of My Heart ♡ said:
wow, beautiful…. :)
poeticjourney said:
Beautiful talent!:)
Sanah said:
Thanks a ton. :)
Chhavi Pruthi said:
Splendid…reminds you of your love and heartbreaks :)
Sanah said:
Thank you so much Chhavi ! :)
Bottled Up Sentiments. . said:
Thanks a ton Guneet ! :D
CJs In Sight said:
Wow, so much experience and emotion at 13. This reminds me of one of my first love poems, sounds so similar, except I was about 17. Keep writing!
Bottled Up Sentiments. . said:
Girls usually attain maturity level faster than guys !
Thank you for stopping by Carlos !
I’d love to see more of your poems ! :)
blueeyesbutterfly said:
Beautifully written =) good job! Keep writing =)
Bottled Up Sentiments. . said:
Thanks ! :D
Justus Rajan said:
It’s strange how it works. They hurt you so bad, but you still end up hoping the best for them. The poem’s awesome. :)
Bottled Up Sentiments. . said:
Thank you Justus.
Sometimes forgiving people is all you can do. :)
dreadlord2203 said:
Beautifully written… Reminded me of my first crush…. Keep writing…
Bottled Up Sentiments. . said:
Thank you. :)
blessmylove said:
True feelings, so nicely knit to make this beautiful work….I am inspired …I am going to write one on my first love too.. This is really touching one..I felt it.
Bottled Up Sentiments. . said:
I’m so glad.
Let me know about your new posts.
C. Wayne Brown said:
You write very beautifully!
Bottled Up Sentiments. . said:
Thank you so much Sir ! :)
St. Cain said:
I like this one.
Kaitlin said:
This is all Magnificent! Keep up the good work!