Tags
ash, burning, cancer stick, charcoal eyes, cigarette, derelict, embers, inhaling, marred, nicotine stained nails, parched lips, pictures, poem, poison, puffing, quote, refuge, rheumy, ruins, scarred hand, sensual drags, smoke, stinging
Marred charcoal eyes
Rheumy
Bloodshot
Momentarily stinging with smoke
Parched black lips
Deftly
Heavily puffing
Inhaling poison
Pale, scarred hand
With nicotine stained fingernails
Lightly tapping
Taking long sensual drags
Burning embers fall
On the soiled floor
Of a derelict ruin
A refuge at nightfall
Strewn with ash,
Burnt match sticks and cigarette butts
Note: This poem is a work of fiction. I don’t smoke neither do I think it’s for cowards. I personally am against it but to each his own.
Vivid imagery. Well captured! ;)
Thanks. I try my best. :)
Once again a truly awesum work by u rehman keep it up and i totally support u fr this work….
I love you soo much, Nandita Kukreja.
nice work sanah
Arjun. Thanks ! :D
I love the pictures i love the words.. it all syncs into each other perfectly.. :-D
Thank you Abhichica ! :)